Bess’s Magical Garden, two pages of chapter one

The sun streamed in the window and illuminated the ivy wallpaper. Bess looked around and felt bewildered until she remembered that she was in their new home in Pineview. After she was fully awake, she realized that the room looked different in the daylight. The streetlights were on when they had arrived the night before. She looked out the bay window and noticed the snow-white apple blossoms. So that was the fragrance she had smelt.

Bess’s thoughts drifted back to the day she had collapsed in ballet class. An ambulance had rushed her to the hospital, where her parents met her. After several tests the doctors told them that she had a mild case of polio. She ended up spending many months in the hospital undergoing treatment and physical therapy before she was ready to go home. She had worked hard, but she still had to wear a brace and use a crutch.

Her thoughts were interrupted when Mother breezed into the room. “Rise and shine.”

“Don’t want to,” Bess grumbled, as she brushed some tousled hair out of her eyes.

Mother smiled. “It’s a warm sunny day. Let’s have breakfast in the garden.” The air was filled with the scent of jasmine as she walked past. Mother took the clean clothes out of the open suitcase on the window seat.

Bess rubbed the sleep out of her eyes. “Would rather eat here,” she said. Didn’t Mother know how difficult it was to walk that far? Megan, her cousin and best friend, had always dropped in before school, so they could eat breakfast together. Megan had lived in the apartment across the hall. Bess had stayed at Megan’s last weekend, while Mother and Uncle Joe moved the furniture. Megan beat her at snakes and ladders and checkers several times. The fun filled weekend ended too soon, and her new life suddenly began. She and her mother had left the city early Monday morning and arrived at their Pineview home late last night.

It wasn’t fair that Mother had wanted to move. The doctor’s had told Mother that Bess needed fresh air and light exercise  and not to lie around the apartment all day.

“Get up and get dressed,” Mother said firmly. “There will be all kinds of fun things to do this summer. Would you like to decorate your room?”

“What’s the point? There isn’t anything to do without Megan,” Bess grumbled, rubbing the sleep from her eyes.

“There’s a path near the patio door that leads into a sheltered garden. See you there shortly,” Mother answered.

Bess reluctantly got out of bed. After tucking her crutch under her arm, she hobbled across the room to look at the clothes that Mother had laid out. Why did Mother want her to dress up? Weren’t her everyday clothes good enough? As Bess tried to decide whether to wear the skirt or a pair of slacks, her thoughts drifted to that day six months ago when they’d received the news about the car crash that took Father away forever. Bess had waited at the hospital with Mother, because she had been released that same afternoon to continue therapy as an out patient. She and her mother had received the news that someone had sped through a green light and rammed into the driver’s side of the car, killing Father instantly.

Bess proceeded down the hallway to the patio door and hobbled down the path. She stopped  and looked around in amazement. For a brief second, she thought that she saw an archway covered with orange flowers that lead into a colourful garden… but it was gone in an instant. Instead, an archway covered in tangled vines with a broken gate swung on its hinges. The space was overgrown with weeds and surrounded by a crumbling stone wall. A tangle of weeds almost hid the stepping stones.

She proceeded to the stone bench in the middle of the yard. Not until Mother arranged a tray with an assortment of muffins and fruit did Bess realize how hungry she was.

written by M.E. Hembroff

Did you enjoy reading this small excerpt of my juvenile novel Bess’s Magical Garden? I would appreciate an honest review on Amazon and Goodreads.Email me at mehembroff@hotmail.ca putting review for Bess’s Magical Garden in the heading. I will send you a pdf file of the last version before the book went to print. Thankyou.

 

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About mhembroff

I am a graduate student from Ashworth college. I am an artist and belong to a local art club. I am a member of The Writers Guild of Alberta, fighting book worm in the write4kids cbic clubhouse and member of The SCBWI and attend local workshops whenever I can.
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